I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Wednesday, 27 February 2013

Writing Sample

once upon a time there were two brothers they were feeling very bored so they decided to go for a walk in the forest.The forest was called zealandia They have not seen each other such a long time.There names are James and Jarrod But James was the older brother he lived in America and Jarrod lived back here in new zealand so because they don't see each other  much they wanted to have a bit of fun so they got on there bikes and started riding They stopped by  a few Bush's and then they stopped by a tree that had  seats so they had a 5 minute lunch they had some sandwichs also they had a drink of water then had a look at a few the trees so after looking at all those trees they got back on there bikes a went home after a busy day.

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